Jurassic Park db forum

i'm in school, but i'm here

Well, I've been revising for my next set of exams in 4 weeks - so yeah.

Anyway, if you insist, I'll stick around...

of course stick around, any help is well appreciated


btw, i guess the reason i haven't been contirbuting much lately is because i'm struggling to write scripts for my own films that i'm doing next summer

how much more of the story do we need by the way?

*shrugs* I don't know...
Where is Chase anyway...?

i dunno, he disappears sometimes

Im here just stuck in writers block hell... Im curious to see Dinos Script, Like Dialogue and stuff.. I would like to combine the two some how... I like his Ideas but I think mine Are just as good, but We shall see. what ever the majority thinks,

Now It will be twice as hard for me to really contribute Because I just found a job YEAH!! lol,

But I'll Be here and If I come up with some stuff I'll throw it in!!

Ok, cool. Well..., then, lets get back to it...!

Oh, and I might not be posting to often here for a while, I've really gotta get some serious revision in before my external exams...!

chase wrote:Im here just stuck in writers block hell... Im curious to see Dinos Script, Like Dialogue and stuff.. I would like to combine the two some how... I like his Ideas but I think mine Are just as good, but We shall see. what ever the majority thinks,

Now It will be twice as hard for me to really contribute Because I just found a job YEAH!! lol,

But I'll Be here and If I come up with some stuff I'll throw it in!!

Well, I only made the premise. I think that's the best way to start. As for scenes taking place and dialogue, well, that will be made by the team. I still have to make up the rest of the happenings in the premise. This is what I got so far:

After getting past the jammed laboratory doors the group is attacked by a pack of chameleon Raptors and has to lock themselves up again in order to remain in one piece. Levine immediately knows who jammed the doors and starts to make up a plan to get everything under control. He is told that there are small maintenance tunnels running under the facility in case of power shortage, making everyone decide to use them to get around without being in contact with the dinosaurs. They now have to stop Dodgson from getting away, who is working with his small team of fifteen mercenaries, including King and Baselton, to get eggs from various dinosaurs. One of his men is beaten to a bloody pulp by a herd of Pachys while Dodgson ruthlessly uses the moment to get the needed eggs, leaving the man to his death. Baselton grows tired of Dodgson's tyranny and tries to put an end to it, but Dodgson knocks him uncoscius with a tazer. Dodgson, after three of his men are savagely killed, now realizes that the Raptors have somehow freed themselves and steals a Hummer full of eggs and blood samples in order to get away. Meanwhile, Baselton wakes up and sees the remaining men fighting the Raptors and the other dinosaurs in a losing battle. He sneaks away but is spotted by a small T-Rex, chased down by it and eaten.

Dodgson is stopped by a pack of Ankylosaurs that are resting on the path. He honks the horn, makes them aggrivated by his violent looking metal beast and tries to back away with the car. The alpha male charges him before he can get away and destroys the engine with one swipe of it's tail. Dodgson grabs the closest case of a bloodsamples and runs into the jungle as the mad Ankylosaurus turns the whole Humvee into a pile of scrap. He keeps running before he stumbles and rolls down a hill, losing his last remaining samples. Dodgson, now having lost the game, comes to a dead stop as he stumbles close to a cavern that is guarded by five Velociraptors. Dodgson, having grown completely tired of the dinosaurs, throws a rock at them, shouting and kicking the ground. The rock hits one the creatures in the head and makes them attack him. "You cost me millions of dollars, freaks!", are his last words before they rip him apart.

Levine has now reached the main computer and seals the facility, locking the rampaging dinosaurs inside the complex. His team now has to contact the U.S military and get out of the area in one piece. After getting past a herd of Pachycephalosaurs, Ankylosaurs and finally the giant Spinosaurus in the film's most daring scene, Levine's group radioes for rescue and tries to leave, but is caught between a battle of the two Velociraptor tribes. They barely escape as the dumber reptilian Raptors are finished off. The Spinosaurus traps the team, but is killed by the sheer number of the Velociraptors. They, however, have to lock themselves up again to prevent the Raptors from reaching them. Levine, now that the exit route is blocked by a pack of ferocious carnivores, has to find out how the Raptors got off their pen. They manage to get themselves armed with gas grenades and enter the ventilation system that the Raptors used to get around. They soon discover a hole that leads underground. They unwillingly go inside.

Levine's group reaches an opening in a maintenance tunnel and witnesses the Raptor's new nesting grounds. They stay out of the way, observing the animals before all the dinosaurs run outside, spooked by something. Levine meets a group of soldiers that had found a way into the system. Levine is lead out of the caves and into a clearing where a helicopter is waiting. Levine thinks he has survived, but is proven dead wrong as a flock of Pteranodons attack the choppers. Levine is almost pulled out of the vehicle by a Ptera but manages to use it's beak to cut himself loose. The Pteras lose interest and disappear into the mist.

The final chapter of the film takes place in the court room where Malcolm has won his case, and therefore has finished off the last hanging remains of InGen and gotten the governent to compensate for the families of all the people that were lost. Malcolm walks out of the building and smiles as he enters his car and drives off. The story ends to a view of Raptors living in the mountains.

Can we still use a carnotaurus in the script? What does the group think? and should the Carnotaurus' take the place of the chameleon Raptors?

Raptors are just so played out, But I understand your side of raptor evolution, but how many tribes are there now? we have the basic raptors from the first movie, The more advanced cool looking raptors from TLW, and we have the ones with the feather things on there head that are cold blooded killers and extreemly smart. Now were throwing in another raptor that can change colors. Im just opening things up a little so we can see where we're going. the raptors are already great...

The reason I want a carno in there is because a carno has a weaknes, DAYLIGHT, It can only move around at night. because daylight shows it to well if it moves. This is different then the raptors who seem to have no weakness except for their size and their pack habits like fighting and stuff. Thats why I think the rex is such a great predator, hes blind as a bat!

Thats why the Spino sucked it had no weakness, you knew there was no way a human could out smart it, because spino would just eat'em up. and thats the same with the raptors, we cant out smart them, so its another killing spree, just like JP 3 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh a dinosaur! .... what do we do now?

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Alan Grant Says "Dont move, it can't see us if we don't move!", Now he can say (when its dark out) " I wouldn't go out there right now" some one says why? Grant says "you hear that?" some one says no? Grant says "Exactly, theres some thing out there! and unlike the day when it is so noisy with calls and bustling little birds and thumping of dinos you hear nothing, every things quiet no raptors calling, nothing, and raptors, well raptors my friend ar Naucternal, Look at there eyes" I dunno some thing like that

I like all of the action in your premise! But the movie needs more story, as for for a dactyl attacking a copter, I dunno I think he might have a problem with getting by the blades.

Good action though

Who is Jeff Rossiter

Jeff Rossiter is the founder of Biosyn and the boss of Dodgson in the books.

I think you're right. The idea I made was mostly based around the baby raptor from the first book, that could change it's colour like a chameleon. My idea was that Raptors were made into different versions, the chameleon type BEING the version from JP and TLW, only having evolved more in it's environment. I made the idea because Raptors are smarter, faster and smaller than Carnotaurus, which means that they can access more places. The original Raptor type was also a night hunter in TLW book, only kept away from the laboratory because the Carnotaur had already marked it as their own. It would be a lot cooler to see two different types of Velociraptor hunting the humans in their own scenes and eventually duking it out for the ownership of the complex.

I'm seriously against Grant being in the whole film. I had planned that Levine goes to see his lecture and, when getting to talk with him, learns that Malcolm has sued the american government for not reacting in time for the dinosaur threat.