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- spinokillingt-rex
- an egg
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In my five and a half star park (oh yeah /cool.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="B)" border="0" alt="cool.gif" /> ) there a hideous monster! You see, one day my Spinosaurus got stressed... and smashed its way out of the back of its cage. Thankfully, this led into the thick, mostly unused jungle portion of my park. I decided to let her live, and watch whatever mischief she would get into. That Spinosaur has heart, I"ll tell you that. She drinks from the rivers. When hungry, she smashed through the cages of my T-Rex paddock and kills one or two (she also is quite fond of the raptors and pachys)... so far none of my visitors has really noticed her. She has been living there for a few months. How long will she last? Will a rex get her? Tune in next week to find out!
- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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(lol, that was a good one! You have the PC version, am I right?)
I was in site B, my Allosaurus' where eating all the Dilophosaurus.
My Ceratosaurus where starving to death, and killed one of my allosaurus.
A twister struck the island and sucked all the ceratosaurus and dilophosaurus up (along with some small herbivoirs), they all died.
My allosaurus was the last dino on the island after it ate everything, then it began to die...when a herbivoir I never even saw appeared and was eaten...a twister struck the island again and killed the allosaurus.
I was in site B, my Allosaurus' where eating all the Dilophosaurus.
My Ceratosaurus where starving to death, and killed one of my allosaurus.
A twister struck the island and sucked all the ceratosaurus and dilophosaurus up (along with some small herbivoirs), they all died.
My allosaurus was the last dino on the island after it ate everything, then it began to die...when a herbivoir I never even saw appeared and was eaten...a twister struck the island again and killed the allosaurus.
- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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wow...that's neat. I've run a park for about 8 years, had 1396 visitor deaths, 37 staff deaths and 83 breakouts...and they where caused by the same dinosaur species....guess it by reading this.
Year 1. My (dinosaur)'s where happily living in their HUGE enclosure, when one began to starv it went and killed the others.
It broke out (and back in) it's enclosure 8 times, ate 2 cleaners and destroyed 5 safari cars.
It ate several visitors, about 50....Maybe more.
This dinosaur kept repeating the same process only the visitor and staff death amount was greater.
Year 1. My (dinosaur)'s where happily living in their HUGE enclosure, when one began to starv it went and killed the others.
It broke out (and back in) it's enclosure 8 times, ate 2 cleaners and destroyed 5 safari cars.
It ate several visitors, about 50....Maybe more.
This dinosaur kept repeating the same process only the visitor and staff death amount was greater.
- Raptor
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Please,try to tell your tales in atleast five paragraphs.I like detail.But,I have another story for you.It was a norml day in my park.Or so I thougt.I was whatching the side of my velociraptor paddock that was next to the walkway for breakouts,when one of the vistors fell on the ground and started to act as if he were being eaten /blink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":blink:" border="0" alt="blink.gif" /> is the look I gave him.All of the sudden,he turned into a raptor!Sorry,but I'm going to have to split this into two parts.Bye!
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- Aquatic_Spinosaurus
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my visitor did that once, and my raptors kept dying and still running around with 0 health.
They acted as if they where alive and they where still running around the park, unable to die. My rex tried to eat them, but they would just fall through the rex.
The raptors looked like they where decaying as they ran around, and when they vansihed (like all the corpses do) they where still killing people! Even when nothing was there!
I hatched more raptors and it said I reached the limit of 60 (the amount it was before the raptors died), and it clearly said I had NO raptors.
One time, my Albertosaurus was screeching whilst in a tornado, then when it landed on the ground it kept screeching and wouldn't stop. It's health said 0 and it was still alive, my rex tried to attack it but the albertosaurus wouldn't shut up. It kept screeching even when it's corpse vanished. (this is on the same park as with the raptors)
Finally, my gallimimus kept catching rabies and dying. And the population gradually went to 0 after the rex ate everything, and I couldn't create anymore dinosaurs because it kept saying I reached my dinosaur limits.
They acted as if they where alive and they where still running around the park, unable to die. My rex tried to eat them, but they would just fall through the rex.
The raptors looked like they where decaying as they ran around, and when they vansihed (like all the corpses do) they where still killing people! Even when nothing was there!
I hatched more raptors and it said I reached the limit of 60 (the amount it was before the raptors died), and it clearly said I had NO raptors.
One time, my Albertosaurus was screeching whilst in a tornado, then when it landed on the ground it kept screeching and wouldn't stop. It's health said 0 and it was still alive, my rex tried to attack it but the albertosaurus wouldn't shut up. It kept screeching even when it's corpse vanished. (this is on the same park as with the raptors)
Finally, my gallimimus kept catching rabies and dying. And the population gradually went to 0 after the rex ate everything, and I couldn't create anymore dinosaurs because it kept saying I reached my dinosaur limits.
- lilgamefreek
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- Rex-Jay
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i remember that only too well.../wink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=";)" border="0" alt="wink.gif" />
The name of this story is called Broken Harmony, its more of a fanfic, not a OG specific story
Well, my story begins on a fine day in my five star park when my parasaur herds were grazing alogside the brachiosaurs. I had just traquilized a rampaging t-rex that i was purposeley starving to see what effect it had on the beast; luckily there were no visitor deaths. I was aweing at the scene I was looking at, the peacefulness of the moving parasaurs, the calls of the brachiosaurs, all in harmony. But I was soon to find out that harmony would broken...badly broken.
I had a enclosure in a far section of the park where I had somewhere around 60-70 raptors(i hacked it that way) in ONE ENCLOSURE!!! There was a strange glitch where they never got hungry unless a goat was released into their enclosure, and when the goat was dead they reverted back to their state of an everlasting fast. So that meant that there was a sea of raptors that didnt need any food!
And this is where the chaos begins. In a horrible twist of fate, three thunderstorms were coming towards my park in a row! Three months of lightning and pounding rains; which would surely cause the carnivores to go on a rampage. Horrible images flashed through my mind: Allosaurs massacreing visitors and cleaners by the dozens, Spinosaurs and Tyrannosaurs battling it out in the middle on my paths! But I never knew what REAL danger was...
The thunders began. Slashing rains and raging forks of electricity ruled the skies of Jurassic Park. The Jurassic Apocalypse as I call it, started with a flash of lightning striking my Tyrannsaur Paddock fences. This panicked the great carnivores and they tore down their electric fences, and began a chain of events that one wouldn't forget.
The three tyrannosaurs ate at least 4 visitors each out of the 400 I had in the park. This triggered something in the mind of the Spinosaurs and the Allosaurs; they annhilated their enclosure fences and struck to stake a name for themselves as the main super-predator. The 3 rexes, 3 spinosaurs, and 5 allosaurs wiped the herbivorous dinosaur population, even the brachiosaurs were shaking in their boots so to speak. The tyrannosaurs destroyed the Park Entrance, leaving 382 visitors trapped. The tyrannosaurs somehow knew that the visitors would be trapped in their mercy, and bellowed their sucess.
All this while, the raptors finally cracked under the pressure of not being fed; and struck a raptor rampage. The climbed out of thier enclosures and this wall of deadly predators sprinted towards the main area of Jurassic Park.
Through the eyes of a visitor at the southern outskirts of the park, the would've surrendered then and there; a mass of 6-foot-tall white dinosaurs with black stripes raced towards the scene of the Jurassic Apocalypse. It was almost as if they wanted revenge for being boxed in without any food; 11 carnivores sounded like a feast to those raptors.
The raptors converged onto the path of the superpredators swallowing visitors like popcorn. The super predators then did battle amongst themselves after gorging their savage appetites; they seemed to want have a kind of dominion over the food supply of visitors and park staff.
The attack seemed to come at once. The raptors hit area where the superpredators where doind battle. This is the reason they called this incident Jurassic Apocalypse. One cannot ever describe how much blood was shed in this chaotic battle. Claws ripping into skin, jaws crushing bones, even though the superpredators seemed to pick the raptors off like flies, they still posed a formidable threat. On one instance, an Allosaur was brought down and killed when a brilliantly thought out plan by the raptors seemed to get the better of the dinosaur. On another occasion, a Spinosaur was overwhelmed when the raptors seemed to have stuck its skin like leeches and cruched at its body and its sail. Eventually, the Allosaurs were wiped out by a combination of raptor tactics and the ferocity of the Spinosaurs and the T-Rexes. All but a few visitors were killed during this fight. It was then that the final battle occured: 1 Spinosaurus versus 2 T-Rexes versus 10 Raptors.
The ferocious raptors picked off the remaining Spinosaur quickly, seeing as it had only a quarter of its vitality left. The raptors decided that they should resort to diversionary tactics; distract the rexes and then attack them at their weak point. The pack-hunters then came to concllusion that, unless they got lucky, they only had enough raptors to bring down one rex. Seeing this conclusion, they decided to they had to somehow make the rexes battle each other... but how?
The answer was simple: they must sacrifice one of their number so that the rexes could fight over their morsel of food in a tug-of-war and during that time the sneak in and kill them! One brave raptor volunteered for the job. He walked out in front of the two T-Rexes and fell to the ground; he was playing dead. The T-Rexes bent low to his body and sniffed it, they knew he was playing dead (they're not stupid you know...). Nevertheless, they couldn't resist being offered free food; one of the rexes was quicker and snatched his body from the ground, it was at that moment the raptor died. The other tyranonsaur bellowed in anger, he also wanted this morsel of meat; so he grapped the other end of the dead raptor and the two engaged in a violent tug-of-war game just as the other raptors had predicted.
The other 9 raptors sneaked i behind one of the rexes and climbed onto his back. They then started chewing on him. Sensing an overwhelming pain, the tyrannosaur let go of the dead raptor and tried to fend off the ones on his back . It was then that one of the raptors bit the upper most part of the tyrannosaur's spine; it fell to its side dead. 3 of the raptors were crushed when the rex fall over and the were sandwiched between the ground and dinosaur's 7-ton body.
The remaining 6 raptors were then surrounding the remaining rex, seeing if that should scare it. But 6 raptors were nothing compared a tyrannosaur. The tyrannosaurus roared, seeing if its otherwordly bellowing should scare away the raptors. But it didn't.
Just then, a helicopter carrying hunters with machine guns arrived from behind one of the mountains in the distance.
"Take us down, Jimmy." said one of the hunters.
"Roger." said the pilot.
The helicopter set down a safe distance away from the battling raptors and the tyrannosaurus.
"Let's MOVE!" The leading hunter said.
The tyrannosaurus managed to kill all the raptors and now set its sights on the hunters, it was puzzled to see these strange creatures with whatever it was in their hands.
"Firing positions NOW!"
The hunters all kneeled down and cocked their guns into automatic fire.
"Holy Jesus, what the hell is that thing?" Whispered one of the hunters to one of his comrades.
"Don't know... whatever it is, we're here on orders to kill it." Said the other hunter.
"Fire at will............NOW!" Said the lead hunter.
The machine guns blazed as the smell of gunpowder filled the island air around them. The tyrannosaur now understanding that these creatures are here to kill it, charged in their direction. But by the time it was halfway there it had lost too much blood; it staggered for a few seconds then fell to the ground...dead.
"Ok, round up the remaining survivors and lets get outta here. COME ON PEOPLE, MOVE IT!" Commanded the lead hunter.
The hunters scattered and searched everywhere for survivors; but found only 7 of them.
*****************
The survivors had full compensation for their injuries but were forced to not say a word about what had happened on the island. Though the missing of 393 people wasn't kept silent, and the goverment launched a conspiracy to hold the truth about the incident.
The truth never came to light.
thats my story, hope u like it /wink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=";)" border="0" alt="wink.gif" />
The name of this story is called Broken Harmony, its more of a fanfic, not a OG specific story
Well, my story begins on a fine day in my five star park when my parasaur herds were grazing alogside the brachiosaurs. I had just traquilized a rampaging t-rex that i was purposeley starving to see what effect it had on the beast; luckily there were no visitor deaths. I was aweing at the scene I was looking at, the peacefulness of the moving parasaurs, the calls of the brachiosaurs, all in harmony. But I was soon to find out that harmony would broken...badly broken.
I had a enclosure in a far section of the park where I had somewhere around 60-70 raptors(i hacked it that way) in ONE ENCLOSURE!!! There was a strange glitch where they never got hungry unless a goat was released into their enclosure, and when the goat was dead they reverted back to their state of an everlasting fast. So that meant that there was a sea of raptors that didnt need any food!
And this is where the chaos begins. In a horrible twist of fate, three thunderstorms were coming towards my park in a row! Three months of lightning and pounding rains; which would surely cause the carnivores to go on a rampage. Horrible images flashed through my mind: Allosaurs massacreing visitors and cleaners by the dozens, Spinosaurs and Tyrannosaurs battling it out in the middle on my paths! But I never knew what REAL danger was...
The thunders began. Slashing rains and raging forks of electricity ruled the skies of Jurassic Park. The Jurassic Apocalypse as I call it, started with a flash of lightning striking my Tyrannsaur Paddock fences. This panicked the great carnivores and they tore down their electric fences, and began a chain of events that one wouldn't forget.
The three tyrannosaurs ate at least 4 visitors each out of the 400 I had in the park. This triggered something in the mind of the Spinosaurs and the Allosaurs; they annhilated their enclosure fences and struck to stake a name for themselves as the main super-predator. The 3 rexes, 3 spinosaurs, and 5 allosaurs wiped the herbivorous dinosaur population, even the brachiosaurs were shaking in their boots so to speak. The tyrannosaurs destroyed the Park Entrance, leaving 382 visitors trapped. The tyrannosaurs somehow knew that the visitors would be trapped in their mercy, and bellowed their sucess.
All this while, the raptors finally cracked under the pressure of not being fed; and struck a raptor rampage. The climbed out of thier enclosures and this wall of deadly predators sprinted towards the main area of Jurassic Park.
Through the eyes of a visitor at the southern outskirts of the park, the would've surrendered then and there; a mass of 6-foot-tall white dinosaurs with black stripes raced towards the scene of the Jurassic Apocalypse. It was almost as if they wanted revenge for being boxed in without any food; 11 carnivores sounded like a feast to those raptors.
The raptors converged onto the path of the superpredators swallowing visitors like popcorn. The super predators then did battle amongst themselves after gorging their savage appetites; they seemed to want have a kind of dominion over the food supply of visitors and park staff.
The attack seemed to come at once. The raptors hit area where the superpredators where doind battle. This is the reason they called this incident Jurassic Apocalypse. One cannot ever describe how much blood was shed in this chaotic battle. Claws ripping into skin, jaws crushing bones, even though the superpredators seemed to pick the raptors off like flies, they still posed a formidable threat. On one instance, an Allosaur was brought down and killed when a brilliantly thought out plan by the raptors seemed to get the better of the dinosaur. On another occasion, a Spinosaur was overwhelmed when the raptors seemed to have stuck its skin like leeches and cruched at its body and its sail. Eventually, the Allosaurs were wiped out by a combination of raptor tactics and the ferocity of the Spinosaurs and the T-Rexes. All but a few visitors were killed during this fight. It was then that the final battle occured: 1 Spinosaurus versus 2 T-Rexes versus 10 Raptors.
The ferocious raptors picked off the remaining Spinosaur quickly, seeing as it had only a quarter of its vitality left. The raptors decided that they should resort to diversionary tactics; distract the rexes and then attack them at their weak point. The pack-hunters then came to concllusion that, unless they got lucky, they only had enough raptors to bring down one rex. Seeing this conclusion, they decided to they had to somehow make the rexes battle each other... but how?
The answer was simple: they must sacrifice one of their number so that the rexes could fight over their morsel of food in a tug-of-war and during that time the sneak in and kill them! One brave raptor volunteered for the job. He walked out in front of the two T-Rexes and fell to the ground; he was playing dead. The T-Rexes bent low to his body and sniffed it, they knew he was playing dead (they're not stupid you know...). Nevertheless, they couldn't resist being offered free food; one of the rexes was quicker and snatched his body from the ground, it was at that moment the raptor died. The other tyranonsaur bellowed in anger, he also wanted this morsel of meat; so he grapped the other end of the dead raptor and the two engaged in a violent tug-of-war game just as the other raptors had predicted.
The other 9 raptors sneaked i behind one of the rexes and climbed onto his back. They then started chewing on him. Sensing an overwhelming pain, the tyrannosaur let go of the dead raptor and tried to fend off the ones on his back . It was then that one of the raptors bit the upper most part of the tyrannosaur's spine; it fell to its side dead. 3 of the raptors were crushed when the rex fall over and the were sandwiched between the ground and dinosaur's 7-ton body.
The remaining 6 raptors were then surrounding the remaining rex, seeing if that should scare it. But 6 raptors were nothing compared a tyrannosaur. The tyrannosaurus roared, seeing if its otherwordly bellowing should scare away the raptors. But it didn't.
Just then, a helicopter carrying hunters with machine guns arrived from behind one of the mountains in the distance.
"Take us down, Jimmy." said one of the hunters.
"Roger." said the pilot.
The helicopter set down a safe distance away from the battling raptors and the tyrannosaurus.
"Let's MOVE!" The leading hunter said.
The tyrannosaurus managed to kill all the raptors and now set its sights on the hunters, it was puzzled to see these strange creatures with whatever it was in their hands.
"Firing positions NOW!"
The hunters all kneeled down and cocked their guns into automatic fire.
"Holy Jesus, what the hell is that thing?" Whispered one of the hunters to one of his comrades.
"Don't know... whatever it is, we're here on orders to kill it." Said the other hunter.
"Fire at will............NOW!" Said the lead hunter.
The machine guns blazed as the smell of gunpowder filled the island air around them. The tyrannosaur now understanding that these creatures are here to kill it, charged in their direction. But by the time it was halfway there it had lost too much blood; it staggered for a few seconds then fell to the ground...dead.
"Ok, round up the remaining survivors and lets get outta here. COME ON PEOPLE, MOVE IT!" Commanded the lead hunter.
The hunters scattered and searched everywhere for survivors; but found only 7 of them.
*****************
The survivors had full compensation for their injuries but were forced to not say a word about what had happened on the island. Though the missing of 393 people wasn't kept silent, and the goverment launched a conspiracy to hold the truth about the incident.
The truth never came to light.
thats my story, hope u like it /wink.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=";)" border="0" alt="wink.gif" />
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